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The Dragons' Way by `Rushy:iconRushy:





Dragons of the world are few and seldom seen in light of day.
I`ll share these secrets with you and tell you of The Dragons` Way.

Northern Dragons snooze in ice. In glaciers they build their homes.
Frost and snow form paradise. They sleep beneath an igloo dome.

Eastern Dragons everywhere. At Chinese New Year they arrive.
Legend sees them wise and fair. In oldest tales their myth survives.

Southern Dragons guard the seas. Hence "Here be Dragons" on old maps.
Truth to tell they`re catching zees. `Neath island palms they take long naps.

Western Dragons battle knights. From here Saint George`s legend stems.
They`d far rather sleep than fight, atop a pile of gold and gems.

Now you know The Dragons` Way. Imagination can take flight.
Thoughts of them may pack your days and dragon dreams fill up your nights.
©2008-2009 `Rushy
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My ' Poetry ' entry for the "Children`s Lit. Contest" which can be found here.

:w00t: It got second place in the Poetry section! :w00t:

:omfg: A DD! :wow:
I don't quite know what to say ...
:w00t: Thank you ^lovetodeviate ! :faint:
Daily Deviation, 2008-07-22

Daily Deviation`Rushy tells us all about dragons in The Dragons' Way, a fun little poem for children. (Featured by `lovetodeviate)

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Sweet stuff, I like this alot :)

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The Moving Finger writes, and, having writ,
Moves on; nor all your Piety nor Wit
Shall lure it back to cancel half a Line,
Nor all your Tears blot out a Word of it.
I like this a lot, and it reads beautifully, but there's just one small issue. I'd like you to format your title correctly i.e. 'The Dragons' Way', and watch out for that apostrophe in the body of text. There's one instance of a plural, I think, but apart from that I'm pretty sure it should be always be dragons'. It's just a small thing, but it will improve your chances in the contest. :)

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Ah yes! I forgot you're a Nazi for that kind of stuff.

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Thanks :D

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I like this one, dragons are wonderful :aww:

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Very nice Rush:)

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Thank you :D

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Yup. Pretty fantastic creatures :nod:

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