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The Dragons' Way by `Rushy:iconRushy:

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My ' Poetry ' entry for the "Children`s Lit. Contest" which can be found here.

:w00t: It got second place in the Poetry section! :w00t:

:omfg: A DD! :wow:
I don't quite know what to say ...
:w00t: Thank you ^lovetodeviate ! :faint:

Daily Deviation

Given 2008-07-22

`Rushy tells us all about dragons in The Dragons' Way, a fun little poem for children. (Featured by `lovetodeviate)

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=Spamuel Apr 13, 2008, 2:45:29 AM
Sweet stuff, I like this alot :)

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The Moving Finger writes, and, having writ,
Moves on; nor all your Piety nor Wit
Shall lure it back to cancel half a Line,
Nor all your Tears blot out a Word of it.
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~Void-Hamlet-Herself Apr 13, 2008, 2:50:11 AM
Sleepy breed, dragons ... :no:

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CoPaP | ~bulgaria
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*ThornyEnglishRose Apr 13, 2008, 3:08:09 AM
I like this a lot, and it reads beautifully, but there's just one small issue. I'd like you to format your title correctly i.e. 'The Dragons' Way', and watch out for that apostrophe in the body of text. There's one instance of a plural, I think, but apart from that I'm pretty sure it should be always be dragons'. It's just a small thing, but it will improve your chances in the contest. :)

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`Rushy Apr 13, 2008, 3:33:51 AM
Sometimes for hundreds, nay thousands of years... And that's just a nap!

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In vino veritas, nunc est bibendum. - In wine is truth, now we must drink.
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`Rushy Apr 13, 2008, 3:37:29 AM
Ah yes! I forgot you're a Nazi for that kind of stuff.

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In vino veritas, nunc est bibendum. - In wine is truth, now we must drink.
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`Rushy Apr 13, 2008, 3:37:40 AM
Thanks :D

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In vino veritas, nunc est bibendum. - In wine is truth, now we must drink.
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=erikalr Apr 13, 2008, 4:58:25 AM
I like this one, dragons are wonderful :aww:

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And they say I should be locked up.... pffffff...
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=The-Muse-Diva Apr 13, 2008, 8:13:56 AM
Very nice Rush:)

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Shawna A. Smart
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`Rushy Apr 13, 2008, 10:48:10 AM
Thank you :D

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Member of :- #britain #DAPensioners .
In vino veritas, nunc est bibendum. - In wine is truth, now we must drink.
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`Rushy Apr 13, 2008, 10:49:11 AM
Yup. Pretty fantastic creatures :nod:

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